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Another story - 2/5/2006 9:56:00 AM 1 votes
Lilitani

 

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i wanted to do somemore on Lili's inital traing and a little duel of jobs^^ The noon sun shown brightly in the sky the oveer the traing ground in windurst walls looking near heavens tower. Lili looking across the feild seeing her training exercise partner Kimra, well Kim you ready to show what happens to a monk who takes on prepared Redmage smiling from ear to ear, Sure only if i means seeing you stand up after defeat kimra quickly responded with a grin of her own. Looking to the class children in the Red mage understudy, As kimra turned to do the same to the upstart monks in trainging, You will see a broad deminstation of my ablities aswell The Kimra's so be watching with all intent to learn for what will transpire. Looking out seeing nothing but nods of approval, Hey pay attention to me stop drueling over my armor one day you all will down this mantle, Looking into most of their eyes are you ready cause its about to began? Seeing nods and few words yea kick that monks bottom in to show them who is stronger Miss Lilitani. Ok ok i will do my best she is a very good monk who has taken out alot of mages in Conflict, but will have more trouble from me than any before^^, With that said lili turned to see kimra already psyching herself up with a few quick combintions of punches and kicks. Ready Kimra? Stundents? We are all ready. Looking at the head minister to give his nod of approval Lili can't help but think back to when she saw her first demonstration on this very feild..... The sky hung heavy with a sea of dark clouds over head, I hope it doesn't rain today children of our demondtration will be pushed back 2 more weeks, Lili seeing a look of worry on the teashers face. But as that was said a little taru arrived at the class room the demonstration will commence a scheduled even if it begins to rain. Lili;s heart swored o'boy this will be a day to remember she though hearing that the top 2 monks students of San Doria we giving the demonstraion. The teacher had them line up to head to the training ground, after what seemed forever Lili could see the trainging ground. Looking out seeing the to young Elvaan males in meditation preparing mentaly for the task ahead, Afetr a few moments when all the students has beeen silenced, Rhe Elvaan instructor Rise to your feet. Upon hearing this the two elvaan youth stood to their feet. The elvaan indtructor surveyed the feild. My two tops students of their respected classes on my right is Baos, on my left is Menes each giving a quick bow to the on looking mass seeing a few returned bow clumsily done the instructor had the face and bow then face him and again bow. Afetr doing so the contest began each trying to show their skill. But it was eveident to Lili that Baos was the moree advanced student taking a better stance to be able to strike and counter Menes, But even though Baos seemed better Menes would always find a way around his defense and land a few good shots in,. But seeminly outta nowhere she caught a glimps of kimra who decided she wanted to see what was going on. Trying to watch the duel , she kept looking at kimra who seemed to be mimicing the movements that she was seeing preformed in front of her. watching closely to both as best she could she turned back from looking at Kim to See Baos land a huge Backhand Blow that sent Menes realling back Seeing his oppertunity Baos used a dragon kick, barely recovering in time to avoid the sweep baos had jumped to finish the move, a gasp could be heard as a Loud thud could be heard followed by the painful sound of someones head rockiting off the ground. The Elvaan instructor began to count 1... 3.. tehn stop a=turning to Vaos and declaring him the winner of the contest, then turning immediatly tro menes who barely managed to block th kick he said but could recover in time to stop his skull fro hitting hard on the grond. Turning toward Baos the Instructor seemed to be to angry for words but muttered, Help your classmate up now we'll talk about your actions later. After helping Menes up baos could be seen gettig scolded for use a technqiue that had not been shown to Menes was againts the rules and he would be punished when they got home. But after the scolding Baos recvied , Menes could be seen looking over the crowd and seemed to stop and glance toward Kimra who lili could see bowing in utmost respect of Menes who returned the bow eith a San'Dorina salute, Truned to Baos and pointed out the Mithra who again to Baos bow in utmost respect seeing this Baos to Saluted in the same fashion as Menes. remebering it all the Intructor Could be heard Begin! Lili looked up to see a fire burning in Kimra eyes a look she has seen many times, the i will not lose no matter what you do look. Knowing full well Kimra would be looking to end the bout quickly Lili bagan to cast one of her favorite spells, Lili felt Kimras energy soar as she prepard to be bludgioned many times over, Afetr a few seconds of intense swinging Kimra backed off to see Lili was still on her feet, You'll have to do more than that if your gonna beat me in the first 30seconds Lil giggeled. Kimra realizing that Lili had just put up Phanlax and had abosrbed a portion of the attack, Coming to rush in again Kimra felt a paralzying spell rush over her but was able to quickly rid her self focusing her chakra., Thyey colided with a fury of sword and sheild blocks and stikes mixing with Kimras fury of punches and kicks. beign able to fend Kimra off to a point Lili knew she had to use her Chainspell, or kimra would for sure end this fight quickly due to her melee prowess. Starting quickly binding the Kim into place then backing off, as Kim looked on as if to expect to be slept then awakened with a more hurtful spell the again slept and awakemned until she passed out. Lili wanted to slow her down and use a more melee aproach, she did not sleep kimra but instead cast blind crippling Kimra's sight but giggle came from Kim as Lil knew she had focused her enegry into Listening for her movements for where to strike blows, But then a second spell washed over Kimra, she could feel it weighing her down making her seem heavier than she really is,the thrid spell that washed over Kimra was one she had seen Lili use alot to slow down the attacks of her opponets. As the bind Lifted Lili could be heard casting Cure IV to recover her stamina Then a quick stoenskin, As again locking blows with kimra who now a a huge disadvantage. knowing her spells would not last much longer had decide to finish off Kim. As she could be she raising her sword to begin the attack KImra unleashed a huge Raging Fist which slpit Lili stoneskin as in that moment Phanlax had worn off. recving a powerful Fist to the face Lili unleashe a migthy Flat Blade which in the same instnce connected with Kimra's head As Kimra's foot caught Lili sqaure in the side of the head, A gasp could be heard as both competitors fell to the ground each not moving till a few minutes had passed. Standing both could hear, That was the best Duel we have seen in yearsThe Head instructor was applauding. All the students could be heard talkimg about what transpired. Lili looking at Kim, Walked over to her sister in arms and gave her a huge hug that was fun lets not do it again anytime soon. she whispered .Then Turning to the head instructor telling the students the could have the rest of the day off. Cheers could be heard as he explained to the teachers they would be to wound up from this display to focus on the rest of their lessons. Then turning to them and saying thankyou but you did not have to be so hard on each other a simle demonstaion is all we truly wanted, And your sure you don't want to be paid for this He asked? Kim and Lil both shock their heads showing them and seeing their faces at what they could do if they too worked hard is all we need to be paid. Now off walking toward the residental zone they began to chat, Kim why didn't you stand before the 10 count? i knew you had the stregnth to do so? All kim responded was you know you could have to, so why didn't you? Before Lil could answer She began to hear their names beign shouted at from behind. Looking back to see their favorite Pld/Whm combo Brodie and Dixon Saying that was the best display we have seen for awhile you two really know what your doing i guess that why we team upThey exclaimed happily, but Lil and Kim both returned the compliments with you are also on top of what you need to accomplish in battle, By the way aren't you next up to display your talents Dixon? Yes he said they r showing a Pld/Drk battle the next day. Who you going against i think they told me Nevin but i'm not sure? Well good luck your gonna need it lili said cheeringly No promblem it'll be fun but we gotta run class is about to start up agin and they want us to give a speech said Dixon. Well i gueess not all te students got sent home early. They did? Yea after the duel between Kim and Myself. explained Lil. Oh ok well we're goona still go and get set-up then see you two around as Brodie and Dixon started to head off to the school, Hey we should go bust some Beastmen heads toghter sometime it'll bE alotta fun Lil shouted. Brodie turned around count on it! as they turned Kim said i gotta go cya around as she used her Instant warp scroll waving goodbye. After Kim dissapeared Lili slowly wndered home to take a nap. i hope you like it and as always sorry about grammer(dance) (dance) (dance) (dance) (dance) (dance) (dance) and to those whos names i used i hope you don't get mad^^;

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             to each their own^^
Rdm/Nin/Rng/Sam/Blm/Mnk 4 life
Maat Mashed: as Red Mage
Rank Windi: 10 sandi: 10 bastok: 10 CoP-complete Zil-15 ToAu- Complete
i will not explain what "to each their own" means just think about it ;p

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RE: Another story - 2/5/2006 3:09:00 PM 1 votes
Whyspernwind

 

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Grammar isn't much o'an issue with me, so I'll dance in 'n sing your praises!! Yet another wonderful tale which I enjoyed very much :)

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RE: Another story - 2/5/2006 5:31:00 PM 1 votes
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Agreed^^ A great story indeed

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